Postcard Triptych Feedback

FOR CAMRYN COGSHELL

Postcard #1
- Very clear contrast and good legibility
- Nice framing when the desktop version is modified into the mobile version
- I like how you used the same color from his shirt for his name
- Maybe add a period at the end of the quote

Postcard #2
- Very effective use of color and typeface choice
- Bring down the quote a little more down towards the middle for the mobile version
- The two orange rectangles framing the quote changing from a vertical to horizontal format might be a dramatic change
- Increase size of text a little more for the mobile version

Postcard #3
- Add source/reference of quote
- Add period to the end of the sentence
- Maybe bring down the image and text more towards middle/bottom for the mobile version
- Try having the gradient come from bottom to top for the mobile version or keep the horizontal gradient but have the darker tint extend in more